Teesta Review: A Journal of Poetry, Volume 1, Number 1. May 2018. ISSN: 2581-7094
Neerav
Patel: A Voice of Guajarati Dalit
---M.B . Gaijan
Neerav
is a retired bank officer and completed his doctoral research in literature
still pens to represent Dalit issues realistically. Marxist influence is also
visible in his poems. But frankly he admits, as most of Dalits admit Dr.
Ambedkar remains as a great source of thinking throughout his life.
o
where are you my midas;
those people refuse to touch me!
they do not allow me to forget
for a moment that
i am Neerav patel, alias harijan.
i
wonder how and why i am a harijan! because I don’t dress like them,
speak like them, behave like them? because my father and his
father is harijans? no I know this silly sequence ends somewhere in the
past, for everybody is born as adam and eve – naked, free and equal. I would
like rather to die than to dwell upon the plea that nobody can select one’s
parents.
yes,
it is because of them only I am a harijan……
I
know little English and less of poetry, having born in harijan ghetto,
nursery school or k.g. are still fascinating dreams of a deprived
childhood………………………
i
wish I could and appeal at the same time! the urban intelligentsia is
insensitive unaware of the harijan
experience and problem.
They have tortured me for a
long. …………(Joshi Barbara.R 88)
This poem is his earlier poems so term harijan
is used at the place of Dalit. At that time in rural Gujarat untouchability was
practiced as I.P.Desai’s work Untouchability in Rural Gujarat describes.
Even today Dalits are treated differently in rural Gujarat.
In
his poem ‘Journalistic Apathy’ he writes reality. The role of media is very
important in democracy but there is something missed by media and missing
multiplies Dalits’ misery. Whenever injustice and cruelties committed on Dalits
and are not highlighted or exposed the cruelty doers get indirectly
encouragement and may repeat the crime. Actions also must be taken.
it is neither
glossy nor glamorous.
not chic, nor
debonair.
like a
surrealist’s imagination of anatomy
it’s clumsy,
distorted and nauseating.
but the bleeding
wound on the forehead is hot red
as the deep
romantic chasm on the centre-spreads
of mod mags.
it was just
hoping on the ground like a slaughtered head
of a chick
before a moment
the eyes were
aglow with tears,
(alas, they are
dead as dumb-bells)
the sensuous
lips are turning muddy brown
like a draught
hit-earth…………………………
it never claimed
headline or hotline –
the teleprinter
went tick-ticking the sport flashes,
the cameras feasted
on the nude beaches
the poor head of
a harijan!
it is as
compassionate as the as the wrinkled face
of mother
Teresa. darkness settled like dust upon the sad
face of agony –
it carves for lime light……..
make it a cover
page agony. (Joshi Barbara R 89)
It
is one of his earlier poems but it is still relevant today. Cruelties on Dalits
are still waiting to get proper place in media. Earlier it was not considered
worth even to highlight. Now gradual change is coming.
Whenever you
come with broom and dust-bins in the streets, you cease to be the black jasmine
grown upon the dark dung-hill outside the boundaries of our village…….
You, jasumati,
suddenly become jasmine again for a moment: the dried paste of honey upon your
black lips begins to moisten. Had it been midnight the fireflies would have
kissed them in search of juicy buds – your cups dripping brews!
Instantly you
become feast for the zooming vultures. A nasty joke, a quick and sudden hug a
slap upon your heavy buttocks. You are cornered like an easy prey. They enjoy
the delicious most touchable flesh of an untouchable girl. You moan and become
mother – mother of a bastard. They button up the trousers and take a plunge in
the ganges.
They defile you,
dear jasumati like a crow defiles with his dirty bill. (Joshi Barbara R 89-90)
The
poem reminds Mulkraj Anand’s Untouchable a century back written novel
where a Dalit girl becomes victim. Cruelty on women is a disgrace but it is
still committed on large scale. Dalit women become more and frequent victims.
The poem is the painful truth of Dalit woman’s suffering. Though, at the end of
the poem, poet expresses his sympathetic love for Jasumati, the Dalit
girl.
In his poem ‘Reconciliation
Convention’ Neerav strongly expresses his anger when injustice
and cruelties committed on Dalits by the orthodox. He writes;
Very proudly they say
The sun rises in the east
Then why this primordial darkness does not disappear from the Aryavarta?
It is since ages the tail has gone
And yet why the beast is still alive in the blood?
Rapes, murders, loot, fire and atrocities
The sun rises in the east
Then why this primordial darkness does not disappear from the Aryavarta?
It is since ages the tail has gone
And yet why the beast is still alive in the blood?
Rapes, murders, loot, fire and atrocities
On Dalits continually.
(Dr. G.N.Vankar)
Orthodoxy strengthened by ignorance is more
challenging. Neerav has strongly condemns injustice committed on Dalits. He
also argues that orthodox though follow dogmatic practice and simultaneously
commit injustice. It is painful.
Continuously still going on injustice and
cruelties on Dalits and women, Neerav writes with anger;
Rather than studying and suffer awareness of
Insult, hate and atrocities,
And encourage the inactivity,
It would have been better
If I were illiterate,
I would strike a blow with aadi * on the head of the unjust
Or gulping mahudi** I could have swallowed the insults.”
Insult, hate and atrocities,
And encourage the inactivity,
It would have been better
If I were illiterate,
I would strike a blow with aadi * on the head of the unjust
Or gulping mahudi** I could have swallowed the insults.”
(*wooden stick on which
dead cattle are carried
** drink made of mahuda) (Dr. G.N.Vankar)
** drink made of mahuda) (Dr. G.N.Vankar)
In the poem ‘Exiled Flowers’ Neerav has
presented capacity and abilities of Dalits. He further also notes that if these
Dalits are provided opportunity, they can fully flower and contribute in nation
building;
..Where there is a
village, there is a street of flowers.
These flowers since centuries were in the dark
Sometimes, if they got full moon night, bloomed like lotus.
Sometimes spread fragrance like ratrani…..
These flowers since centuries were in the dark
Sometimes, if they got full moon night, bloomed like lotus.
Sometimes spread fragrance like ratrani…..
They began blooming.
with such colors, that butterflies would fall in love.
With such fragrance, that bees would forget to sting.
Everywhere spread the fragrance of these rustic flowers.
Parliament, secretariat, schools and colleges
As if their exhalation alone
Polluted the environment.
Where there is a village, there is street of flowers.
(Dr. G.N.Vankar)
Neerav has compared Dalits as the unwanted,
unnoticed flowers. But also wishes that if the opportunities are provided them,
they can contribute excellently.
The poem ‘Operation
equality’ is based on the massive earthquake took place on 26 January 2001 Kutch, Gujarat. Large scale death and
disaster took place at that time. It is believed that at the critical time
human being forgets all divisions and tries to be one as family. But in this
poem crude social reality is presented. The poet has addressed the killer
earthquake and portrayed it thus;
You
cannot make everything equal.
Yes,
you chose an auspicious day,
26th
January,
the
republic day of the nation.
The
innocent children of Anjar were
Unfurling
the fake flags of freedom, equality and fraternity
And
like an anarchist you attacked them at random.
You
were so mad with rage that you could not even find a correct epicenter.
Kutch
is a land of saints and donors,
There
may be rare outlaws like Jeasal too
O
good brother,
For
you Delhi or Gandhinagar were not so far.
Yes,
you are right.
The
time is such that you burn with rage
You
may wish to break to pieces the God
Who
had promised to reincarnate himself
but
has hidden himself
Instead
in the idols……. …….
With
their NRI connections
The
series of overseas flights arrives
And
white dogs identify the stench of their corpses earlier.
Rescue
relief rehabilitation everything occurs here as per
The
hierarchy of varnasham dharma
Government
theirs, swaymsewakas theirs
For
them at the maternal uncle’s place mother serves the food
And
we are the helpless ones!
The
rich Swiss tents were taken away by the leaders and officers…….
We
hardly had a share of a piece of tin or tarpaulin
Their
vastushastris said
‘as
per their caste, allot them the plots.
We
were given the wastelands of the village ponds.
Come,
get early salvation by drowning in the ponds!
O
kind brother earthquake,
Your
operation equality is a failure. (Dr.
G.N.Vankar)
The poem
presents unpleasant truth. Opportunists and selfish people got their benefits
even at the critical time. It is indeed very painful reality.
Caste-based
injustice and cruelties are the great demerit of social harmony. Orthodox and Self-centred people for their superiority
complex and their benefits follow that. Iliyas Mansuri, in his M.Phil
dissertation quoted Neerav’s poem ‘Wailing in Wilderness’;
not only in jungles,
but the beasts are everywhere,
also in your neighbourhood hornless,
tailless, clawless biped,
and totally resembling humans.
these beasts enjoy civil rights,
adorned with beautiful names,
like crests upon their ugly heads!
they pounce upon our kids
playing like squirrel‘s nurslings
as hunting dog.
they kill our full-blooded youngmen.
they dream the smell of our flesh
they push us into the ravines
and oppress like the sheep in the
confines.
they drive us away with dislodged
anchors
shoving on the islets
and we are thrown back miles away
from the land of
civilization. (Iliyas Mansuri 192)
The
poem presents reality and hypocrisy of the orthodox. They say one thing do
different. So Dalits have to suffer.
In
his poem ‘The Vestige’ Neerav expresses his anger when the orthodox treat
Dalits’ according to caste;
who was the satan
sculptor
who carved my name upon
my forehead?
o why do you deep in my
veins to revive my name
like tattooing into the
bark of the tree with a knife?
i wanted to forget my
name and at midnight
i migrated to the city
leaving my hut and hamlet behind
............................
you like the vulture
why is the bill of your eyes
pecking the carcass of
my name perennially?
alas! i am doubtful my
name will survive even after i die.
(Iliyas Mansuri 180)
To
identify other persons’ and treat them differently is the culture of orthodox.
They believe hereditary achieved caste-status can never be changed. And lower
caste can never be good at any level. So Neerav has expressed his pain of
caste-label. He wants to leave it forever but orthodox first ask caste then
deals according to individuals’ caste-status.
Considering
various aspects of Neerav’s poems, it is clearly visible that his poems are
highly mature. Topics he selects for his poetic composition are always
connected with reality. He has also criticized hypocrisy, leadership and so
called humanity.
Notes and Reference:
English translation of Neerav Patel’s poems
are accepted in this paper from three sources
Desai, I. P. Untouchability in Rural
Gujarat. Bombay: Popular Prakashan, 1976.p283
Joshi, Barbara, R. Untouchable!: Voice of
Dalit Liberation Movement. London:
Minority Rights group, 1986.
Mansuri ,Iliyasbhai K. “Gujarati
Dalit Poetry influence of Mahatma Gandhi and
Dr.B.R.Ambedkar”, Shodhganga: a
reservoir of Indian Vankar, Ganapat.
---.“Gujarati Dalit Literature.” Poems by
G.N.Vankar, 1 Jan. 1970, gujaratidalitsahitya.blogspot.com/2009/08/poems-by-gnvankar.html.
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